February 7

Journal - How did you choose to breakdown your 5 paragraphs of information for your essay? You need an introduction and a conclusion but what are your middle three paragraphs about? Have you found your outline helpful? Why or why not?

I organized the three body paragraphs of my paper into religious rights, damage cause, and prevention.  The religious rights paragraph focused on different religious freedoms guaranteed under law around the world.  The damage cause refers to different types of discrimination faced by people around the world.  Prevention describes what needs to happen to fix the problem of religious discrimination.  I found the outline helpful because it was organized in the same way.